Grammatical Error in the Press Release

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Tricia
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Grammatical Error in the Press Release

Post by Tricia »

Just wanted to point this out so it can be fixed. The 2nd sentence of the 2nd paragraph reads, "Availability of brachial plexus statistics vary widely..." It should say varies. I know it's not a big deal, but I wanted to mention it so it can be fixed. I changed it before sending it to my local paper. Hope that's okay.

Tricia
njbirk
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Re: Grammatical Error in the Press Release

Post by njbirk »

Absolutely correct, Tricia. Thanks for catching it!

Nancy
francine
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Re: Grammatical Error in the Press Release

Post by francine »

Tricia - good eyes!

Guess what? the proofing from LAST YEAR AND the proofing team from THIS YEAR didn't notice it....can't begin to tell you how many people looked at this!! LOL LOL

THANKS!! I'll change it now!

-francine
francine
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Re: Grammatical Error in the Press Release

Post by francine »

btw- it's fixed! :)
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